某班開(kāi)展主題為“同學(xué)，放輕松！”的書(shū)信漂流活動(dòng)，號(hào)召大家在考試沖刺階段中學(xué)會(huì)勞逸結(jié)合，適度放松。活動(dòng)要求每位同學(xué)寫(xiě)一封信，介紹自己在忙碌生活之余如何放松自己。假如你是該班同學(xué)李君，請(qǐng)你結(jié)合自己的經(jīng)驗(yàn)，寫(xiě)一封信。

　　內(nèi)容包括：

　　● Describe your busy life these days.

　　● Tell a story about how you relaxed yourself from the busy life.

　　● Give your classmate more suggestions.

　　The exam is coming. In order to work well in it, I spend more time doing exercises. On weekends, I have many classes. How busy my life is!

　　Last weekend, I couldn’t focus myself on my study and I couldn’t follow my teachers in class, because I was too tired and sleepy. Although I tried my best to listen carefully in class, nothing changed. Then I went to my friend Mark’s house, we talked about the life in our primary school. As we recalled our childhood, we all laughed. The sweet memory was like a gust of wind which blew away all my worries and tiredness.

　　In order to relax, I have more suggestions. We can take up some of our hobbies such as painting, dancing and so on. We can also go hiking or flying kites to enjoy the beautiful spring. It is a good choice for us to have a good sleep so that we can refresh our bodies.

　　【詳解】

　　[總體分析]

　�、� 題材：本文是一篇材料作文；

　�、� 時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”和“一般過(guò)去時(shí)”；

　�、� 提示：根據(jù)所給提示完成寫(xiě)作，注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)及大小寫(xiě)等問(wèn)題，不要犯語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，語(yǔ)意連貫。

　　[寫(xiě)作步驟]

　　第一步，總體介紹自己的生活很忙碌；

　　第二步，介紹自己上周的活動(dòng)情況；

　　第三步，最后給一些放松的建議。

　　[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]

　�、� in order to 為了

　�、� try one’s best to do sth 盡力做某事

　�、� take up 開(kāi)始從事

　　[高分句型]

　�、� Although I tried my best to listen carefully in class, nothing changed. (although引導(dǎo)的讓步狀語(yǔ)從句)

　�、� As we recalled our childhood, we all laughed. (as引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句)

 

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